This week we need to write about our best poem we have written over the past few weeks. My best poem I've written is called Old Times. As you can probably tell from the title, this poem is about when I was little.
Old Times
Back in Taiwan,
when I was little,
the people would seem so tall.
The grey toy dog,
I would always hold.
I trail behind my sister.
My uncle came,
with bags of lollies,
giving them to us.
The sweet smell,
nice taste,
the lollies that I love.
While my uncle
wasn't looking,
we hide the cigarettes.
Snickering in the corner
uncle would find us
lifting us up,
the smell of cigarettes.
This is my favourite poem because it brings back precious memories when I was in Taiwan because I haven't been back in ages. I still remember what it felt like when I was little.
Cool poem
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ReplyDeleteawesome poem. I like cheezels.
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
ReplyDeleteNice poem katherine
ReplyDeleteNice poem katherine!
ReplyDeleteI like cigarettes as well!
It seems like Taiwan is fun!
Hope you will go back there one day
Very deep and meaningful poem. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteGreat poem Katherine!
ReplyDeleteWhy did you smoke at that age no just no
ReplyDeleteI didn't smoke, it was my uncle smarty pants
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